This week's 55 Flash Fiction Friday offering uses the prompt "distraction" provided by Lena, a loyal reader. In fact, one of the only loyal readers that is not my daughter. I am doing something a little bit different this post. If you want to hear the piece read in the author's monotone voice, here it is.
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Distraction
He awoke in agony
Choked by the stench of expended gunpowder
His comrades lay motionless
He needed a distraction lest the pain would drive him mad
A pretty, barefoot, girl in a sundress
Her hair shining in the Carolina sun
Her smile beckoned him to her
When medics found him his lifeless face was smiling
Thursday, October 29, 2009
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